[D-Boy]

As some of you may know, I've been working on my Final for my Children's Literature class these past few weeks. I recently finished it, so I figure I'll post two pages of it every day for you guys to look at and tear apart. It's officially labled as a "one shot" at the moment, but we'll see how that goes.

Keep in mind that this is a "children's book" so it's pretty much clean as clean can be.

For the first update, everything up to the first two pages has been posted.

Old School One Shot

[NDX]

I have a feeling this will be a very good read. The artwork is... umm... well, I need to see a few more strips. the opening was a good read.

[Geron Kizan]

I noticed it rhymed. Very creative very.

[D-Boy]

I noticed it rhymed.  Very creative very.

Well, I figured I might as well since it is a children's "book" and whatnot. It adds to the humor later on.

P.S - Two "Cool Points" to whoever can name the most people from the cover. Only two people from there are totally new, so no one will know their names.

[NDX]

Katherine
Matt
Eric
Alicia
Ellen

Look, if I'm right, woo. If not, woo nonetheless. ::burns this post::

[D-Boy]

Katherine
Matt
Eric
Alicia
Ellen

Look, if I'm right, woo.  If not, woo nonetheless.  <strike>Man, I really am a loser.</strike>  Hah, yeah right.

Heh...you got one right. The leader so far.

[NDX]

::burns his previous post::

I'm good at this game.

::stabs computer violently::

[D-Boy]

Pages 3 & 4 are now up.

Page 4 introduces Jodi & Liz who are indeed two co-workers of mine. Jodi was recently used in a 24/7 update not too long ago. See, it pays to know a man who can use a pencil. Or something like that...

[NDX]

Jodi looks like she showed up to class already traumatized.

[D-Boy]

Keep on rollin', baby. You know what time it is.

*Two more pages added*

[NDX]

Looked like a scene out of Children Of The Corn.

[Dargon]

So, is this why Magic Outlaw Go! hasn't been updating? Cause you said every Sunday like two or three Sundays ago...
Anyway, MOG! aside, this is very...unique. And interesting! And very very weird. Of course, with the way most of D's comics seem to go, that's not surprising, but still...
I like it so far. It's kooky in that good Las Vegas way.
...
You know what? I just realized I have no clue what "in that good Las Vegas way" even means...

--Darg--

[D-Boy]

Two more pages, yo.

On a side note I finally got my grade for this thing. *takes a bite of his apple* One "Cool Point" to the first person who says the grade.

[Dargon]

"B". No, "B+". Actually, probably "A", right?

--Darg--

[NDX]

::shrugs:: ''A-'' ?

[D-Boy]

"B".  No, "B+".  Actually, probably "A", right?

--Darg--

And wth his "actually, probably..." Darg gets it right. One point for you.

*spits apple in his face* Now thats...cool.

[Dargon]

Mmm, second hand apple sauce. Yummy! *gives it to Geron as a birthday gift.*

--Darg--

[D-Boy]

Yet another two page update.

*takes yet another bite of his apple* One "cool point" to whoever knows what CD the bottom panel of Kat "freestyling" was done in refference to.

[Dargon]

These kids are starting to scare me...I mean, where'd they get these kinds of skillz?! Goodness, a classroom of child prodigy's! I'd run screaming from the room, too, like that first teach. Egads!

--Darg--

[Geron Kizan]

You offended me with second hand apple sauce....you die now!

*does the sign of bird, dog, ox, emu*

LAKE PUKE NO JUTSU!!!

*entire room is wiped clean by 500 gallons of water that sprouted out of Geron's mouth*

Back on subject, kids are getting smarter these days.